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Hi everyone,

We have received some wonderful writing contest entries for our January 31st deadline,  but we are eager to read more! So please, keep them coming.  We will post the top five entries on our website, and there are lots more cool prizes (All contest details, prizes, deadlines, and rules are HERE!)

But for now, here are a few random and completely arbitrary guidelines we threw together while we were touring… for all the hundreds of times people asked us, “Hey D&D, what are your favorite writing rules?”  We picked out eleven out of the ocean of potential no-no’s, just because these are the ones we hate most:

STUFF NOT TO DO WHEN WRITING

1) Blithely shoehorning adverbs, unadvisedly throughout

2) Naming the hero after yourself and the villain “mom”

3) Writing every detail in dialogue, like when two people meet and they say, “Hi,” and then the other one, a redhead, says, “Hi,” and then the first one says, “Howsit going?”

4) Characters who say everything they are thinking (“Hello Jim. I just wanted to tell you that I would rather go to Sizzler than IHOP because when I was a child I fell into a vat of pancake syrup and now I associate all breakfast cakes with the memory of my negligent father.”)

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Well, we’ve finally come to the end of this crazy book tour…Three events, half a decent meal, fifteen coffees, and two fights a day FOR THIRTY DAYS! And suddenly, it’s over. Now I know thirty days doesn’t sound like very long, but WE ARE TIRED… Over the course of this month, we visited seven states, 39 schools, 18 libraries and bookstores, and presented to over 4,000 people!  Before I give you some of the highlights, let me outline some of the unseen hazards of traveling all over the country with your brother on a super-charged, highly ill-advised, caffeine-fueled speaking tour:

1) Coffee can give you the shakes. Also, it doesn’t work.

2) The “shakes” mentioned above are amplified if the only nutrition your body receives is cheese steaks, truck stop discount beef jerky, and pancakes. The picture below was the most nutritious meal we had all month (that’s Dina’s husband, Philip. He bailed after a week of road-tripping with a comment along the lines of, “You’re both insane. I’m going home.” ).

3) Yes, beef jerky comes in “regular” and “discount”….  the discount kind is the flavors no one else wants.

4) After 2 hours in a car, Daniel starts to make a low whining sound, like a dishwasher on the fritz, that he seems completely unaware of…. huh….

5) Dina only brought enough underwear for 2 weeks… there were no laundry mats.  Daniel only brought one pair of shoes. They were a big hit, and incidentally, they go with anything!

6) After 4 hours in a car, Daniel starts laughing uncontrollably at his own thoughts

7) Google maps lies sometimes.  It is very unapologetic about this.

8 ) If you get the flu and suck it up and go to an event, no one shows up.  If you decide to cancel, the event is packed.

9) Daniel thinks it’s funny to whisper Indian tribal chants under his breath on dark, foggy mornings in the car.  When Dina jumps and says, “what was that?”, he likes to put on an innocent face and say, “What? I don’t know.  But I did hear that this highway was built on an Indian burial ground.”

10) When Dina gets scared (for example, by the possibility of an Indian ghost attack), she WILL pull on the emergency break while the car is moving at 70 miles per hour.   Consider yourself warned.

Of course, this tour has been incredibly fun too!  Besides all the laughs we had in the car (taking pictures of random crap on the road and playing round after round of “would you rather”), we met so many wonderful students, teachers and librarians!  Thank you all for being so awesome!  Meeting all of you made the exhausting car rides worthwhile… speaking of which, here’s a snapshot from the road around Boston.

NEW JERSEY

We started the tour in New Jersey, at the Wardlaw Hartridge school where we met Marina Kennedy, one of the coolest teachers ever. We also got to start the tour off right, during “beach day” when all the students wore their hawaiian shirts and cartoon towels! Nice.  We also experienced our very first fire drill. So far, we have had three fire drills and a lock-down drill during our speeches (the lockdown drill is apparently communicated to the students as “practice in case a squirrel gets into the building”). We’re starting to think our visits are jinxed.  Or that the fire department really hated Another Faust. Anyway, our New Jersey tour also included Princeton where we rewarded ourselves with Hoagie Haven and settled a debate about T-Sweets ice cream versus the Bent Spoon.  The verdict:  They are both necessary to life.  In New Jersey we had some of our best and worst moments.  Visiting the beautiful Purnell school, and experiencing the hospitality and incredible charm of the girls there was a highlight of our tour!  You are amazing, Purnell!   On the downside, our car broke down right before we had to speak at another girl’s school in Princeton and we ended up missing it.  What a disaster it is to break down on the highway between Princeton and NYC. Wow.

Here’s us at Wardlaw Hartridge, and the floor of one of the dorm entryways at Princeton.  The big “Yes” is what Princeton puts on its admission letters.

NEW YORK

In New York, we learned a big lesson:  It takes 2 hours to ride from Queens to Brooklyn on the train!  Leave the house early!  We sprinted into Fort Hamilton high school in the southern tip of Brooklyn covered in rain water, sweat, and positively out of breath, JUST as they were introducing us to a library full of eager students.  Yes, we cut it THAT close.  But in the end, it was a lovely visit.  THANK YOU Fort Hamilton for the awesome chicken salad and croissants.

The great thing about New York was that we had a whole week there, so that we could visit middle schools, high schools, libraries, and book stores. Books of Wonder and Borders Columbus Circle both gave us memorable reading events.  And the New York Public Library too was great fun as always (I wish I had a picture of the Halloween raffle prize, a big squishy ball full of fake cockroaches!).  Here’s us at Borders, including a shot of us with AWESOME book blogger Mitali and her friend Kim, and another shot with Liz and Jonny, aka, Bice and Valentin!

Next, we hit Wall Street. Daniel was nervous going into our talk at the NY High School of Economics and Finance, but then I told him that we could just talk about our book and wouldn’t have to calculate the price of wheat futures or anything.  Phew.  And Bard High School gave us one of the most fun and outgoing audiences ever. We ended the NYC portion of our trip with Pajama Day at a middle school in Brooklyn (first photo)!

TEXAS

By the time we flew to the Texas Book Festival in Austin, we were pretty much falling down with lack of sleep and proper nutrition. But, wow, was it worth it! Austin is AMAZING!  Besides the Tex-Mex, barbecue ribs, and best ice cream ever, we got to meet the fabulous Cynthia Leitich-Smith and her husband Greg, who showed us around town. Our panel with Cynthia “Deals with the Devil” was incredibly fun and we ended up buying a lot of great books at the fair too.  Here’s us with Greg and author-slash-panel-moderator-extraordinaire, April Lurie. (Apparently, I didn’t get the memo that when Cynthia says, “Funny pose!” that means, “Everyone stand still and let the gullible dufus make a fool of herself.” Cynthia, I know your game now! Just wait till next time )

In Austin, we visited some great schools, including a KIPP school with amazing students, as well as both Austin High and Bowie High.  We have to take the time to give HUGE props to Bowie (specifically to Meg, Orr, Dalton, and Josh) for keeping a whole auditorium entertained while we got our act together!  It turned out there was a miscommunication between us and the school and we thought the event was an hour later than it was. So we strolled in an hour late, while these four amazing students kept the audience entertained (apparently Josh knew the names of all the Pokemons!).  A huge thanks to Bowie, Josh, Dalton, Orr, and Meg! YOU SAVED THE DAY! Also, Orr came up with one of the best ideas for a Jekyll and Hyde retelling (”How about having good lunch ladies versus evil lunch ladies?”) NICE!

OKLAHOMA

Now, here comes the crazy part of the trip:  We thought we could actually get up at 4am, fly to OKC, do two events in our home town of Edmond on the SAME day as our flight, then meet up with all our old friends and still have the energy to do another school event the next day before flying out.  Yes. it was foolish. Yes we were dead on our feet.  No, we don’t regret it one bit.  Thanks to Edmond Memorial High School for being so welcoming of a couple of old alums! Thanks to our English teacher Mrs. Vandegriff, and Mrs. Price, our librarian. And thanks to all the wonderful students there who laughed at our lame jokes. :)  Oh, and Mrs. Harold, your signed copy is waiting for you at Best of Books!  Thanks for whipping us into shape with all those AP History essays.

PENNSYLVANIA

Next stop: Philadelphia.  We went to two schools in Philly.  And no, we didn’t have time for cheesesteaks. In retrospect, I regret the decision, but at the time, we were so stuffed with beef jerky, gummy bears, and pancakes, that it seemed gratuitous. I have to send a shout-out to Librarian Tiff at Lansdale Catholic High School, who gave us such awesome fuzzy blankets. Thanks Tiff! At Lansdale, we did a speech as well as a writing group with some future novelists in the class. And we got to practice our “awkward turkey”… (picture below)  

Also, ATTENTION LANSDALE CATHOLIC TENTH GRADERS: I have an endorsement to make.  CHRIS DRUM FOR CLASS PRESIDENT! VOTE TODAY!

THE DRIVE FROM HELL FROM PHILLY TO BOSTON

The car ride to Boston was something out of a horror movie. Our radio broke and we had six hours of driving ahead of us with no entertainment but each other. Plus we got stuck in NYC traffic. Bored out of our minds and desperate for entertainment, we decided to come up with the most German sounding phrase on earth, then the most French sounding, then the most Japanese sounding, and so on.  Then we proceeded to say these phrases over and over in the most over-the-top stereotypical accents possible.

Then, Daniel did the Indian chant thing for like an hour, started the laughing/wheezing/laughing track that happens when he’s starting to go crazy, talked about his kitten for an insanely long time and then did some random cat noises.  At some point we stopped for food at a truck stop. Before getting back in the car, Daniel, out of the blue, started shouting, “Why me? Why me, God?”  Of course, I then broke into a half-hour fit of laughter…  I think it was one of those malnutrition euphorias.

MASSACHUSETTS

In Boston, I had the wonderful opportunity of going back to Harvard. Wow, what an amazing place. I missed it so much. But the welcome Daniel and I received at Eliot House (the house where I tutored during my grad school days) was the best part. Now, most of you don’t know about Eliot House, so I’ll take a minute to say a few words about it.  Imagine if you combined Hogwarts with one of those schools from 1990’s prep school movies like “Scent of a Woman,” then mixed in a Swiss Chalet,  a dash of Christmas, and a big green dome… then you would have Eliot House… a beautiful residential house on the Charles River.  Now, imagine if you combined Anthony Quinn, your favorite professor from college, Papa Hemingway, and Dumbledore, and mixed in an Italian accent, a couple of PhD’s, and a lighthearted distaste for linoleum floors and non-vintage wines, you’d get Housemaster Lino Pertile…  It was so heartwarming to be back in Eliot, and to have so many of my old friends come back to campus to greet us!  Thank you, everyone. (Domus!)

In Boston, we were interviewed by Robin Young of the nationally syndicated radio show HERE AND NOW, a huge highlight of the tour. Oh, and Boston was the city where we visited the most schools.  Several auditoriums-full all over the city and the suburbs. We must have signed thousands of books, backpacks, pieces of paper, cell phones, scrunchies, socks, shoes, and faces.  Yes, faces.  I knew we had gone too far when one kid asked me to sign his shorts. Dude… boundaries.

CONNECTICUT

Finally, we spent a whole week in Connecticut.  Oh, Connecticut in November. It was a blissful way to end the trip.  We visited another super fabulous girls school (Woohoo, Ethel Walker!), and went down to Greenwich to visit Greenwich high, home of Liz Stillman, the model that plays Bice on our book jacket. It was amazingly fun.  Thanks to super-librarian Jennifer Lau for inviting us!

One of the funniest moments of the trip happened on that last drive back to New York, when we were both dying of exhaustion, and we pulled up to a tollbooth and realized we had no cash.  Suddenly, we remembered something.  Earlier that day, one student in Groton, CT had wanted to buy two copies of Another Faust, but only had loose change with her. We had accepted twenty dollars worth of coins (since she had the moxy to offer it) and even took a picture of all of us with the ziplock baggie full of change (below).  When we arrived at the tollbooth, that bag of change was the only money we had on us!  So Daniel proceeded to pull out the baggie and say to the poor tollbooth operator, “Ma’am, I’m afraid we’ll be paying the full $12 in dimes.”  She sighed and said, “just start counting.” It was a long and humiliating ten minutes.

That brings us to the end of our thirty-day, seven-state tour for Another Faust (we considered making it a 10-state tour by crossing the border at several strategic points and just tossing a copy of the book to the first teenage passerby who could be lured to our car. Our judgment was severely impaired by this point in the trip)!

It was an amazing time and we loved meeting all of you!   Please feel free to email us, and CLICK HERE to join the Facebook group for ANOTHER FAUST.

AND DON’T FORGET TO ENTER OUR WRITING CONTEST HERE (DEADLINE JAN 31)!

Until next time (perhaps the tour for ANOTHER PAN, the Second of Another Series),

D&D

Dina and Daniel are happy to open the doors to their very first “retelling” contest!

Okay, so here’s how this works.  First of all, we want EVERYONE to enter (assuming, of course, that you’re not a professional. Unpublished writers only). You don’t have to be a longtime writer, or even an aspiring writer, or a certain age or live in any particular country (this is an international contest).  You DO have to write fluently in English (sorry! Though if you write in any of the languages we are trying to learn, we will read your story just for fun and practice)…

Here are the rules:

1) Write a 3000 word (max) retelling of the Faustian Bargain (”Another Another Faust”) set in any time, place, dimension, or world. Your story can be from any viewpoint, and you can get as creative as you’d like! Don’t exceed 3000 words, but don’t give us filler either. You can certainly tell an amazing story in just a few words.

2) Paste your story in the body of an email (attachments will not be opened). There should be no greeting or any other text besides the story in the body of the email. No need to explain the story background. The writing will say it all! 

3) The subject line of the email should be in all-caps “WRITING CONTEST ENTRY - JOHN SMITH.”  Replace John Smith with your name.

4) Send the story to dviergutz@gmail.com by January 31, 2010.  If your entry doesn’t meet any of the above rules, it will not be read!

5) Five finalists will be selected by February 28, 2010. We will post all five finalists on our website for people to admire and comment. But in the end, D&D will choose the winner. The grand-prize winner will be announced in mid-March.

Now, here’s what you’re playing for:

A signed copy of Another Faust

A handwritten deleted scene

A featured article & interview on our website

An author’s galley of the sequel Another Pan

(And hey, impress us, you never know what can happen!)

Please feel free to pass this email along to everyone you know!! The more entries the better.  If you have a blog, we would appreciate a repost or a link!  We want to given lots of people the chance to complete and to find a truly talented winner!!

Now, start your fountain pens!

Dina and Daniel

Thanks to a blogger (Liyana!) whose fabulous interview forced us to think through our ideal Another Faust playlist, we now have 13 songs (yes, 13… mwahahahaha….) that we have carefully chosen for each character in the book.  There are six major characters (including the devil governess) and Daniel and I both got a turn at picking the songs.  Below are both of our picks. Plus, a playlist where you can listen to them right here.

Daniel’s Playlist:

• Nicola Vileroy – Welcome Home by Coheed and Cambria
• Victoria – Skullcrusher Mountain by Jonathan Coulton
• Valentin – The Feel Good Drag by Anberlin
• Christian – All that I’ve Got by The Used
• Bice – Heaven Forbid by The Fray
• Belle – Flashing Lights by Kanye West

Dina’s playlist:

• Nicola Vileroy – O Fortuna by Carl Orff
• Victoria – Shove it by Santogold
• Valentin - Gives you Hell by All American Rejects
• Christian - All Apologies by Nirvana  OR   Nothing Like You and I by Perishers
• Bice - Hallelujah by Jeff Buckley
• Belle – Love Game by Lady Gaga

I wanted to give you a quick update on how Another Faust is doing, and share 4 ways that you, the fans of Another Faust, can help it become a success, so that Daniel and I can continue to create retellings of wonderful works of classic literature through  Another Series! 

First, the update:  Another Faust is in its THIRD printing in as many weeks!! AAHH!!!  And also, it has been picked for several top new book lists by Borders, Philadelphia Enquirer, Hudson News (top 100), Association of Booksellers for Children, and various blogs. Funnily enough, in the airport channel we are already a bestseller (I’m not sure why… maybe through the karma generated by all the hours I spend in airports), and we are working our way up other lists too! 

Early Reviews:

“An unusual urban fantasy…The writing is clever and stylish…an absorbing, imaginative read, with a tense climax.”  Publishers Weekly 

“The teens’ story is told in detailed, gothic language. Faustian references abound…By switching character viewpoints often, the authors keep the pace moving to an ending full of action, revelation and horror.”  Kirkus

“Dark like so many of the current teen horror fantasy novels and stylish like Gossip Girl, the brother and sister writing team work hard to create characters who struggle with insecurities of the past, the successes of the present, and the pain of both…the context and dark tone will surely find a solid readership.”  VOYA

“A reimagined gothic classic with heavy prose and dark underlying themes: the confliction between good and evil in the human soul and the pitfalls of greed and ambition.” Fantasy Literature.com

“I found the action and events of the story to be compelling, suspenseful even, wondering what Madame Vileroy would do next, when the teens who were in the dark would figure out what was going on, how the more desperate teens would turn on one another next.” Readspace

The three weeks since the debut of Another Faust has been a whirlwind.  Even though I (Dina) have been out of the country, I’ve been bombarded with pictures and notes from everyone who has read the book and has seen it in bookstores. Another Faust is doing fabulously in stores (it’s already on its third printing in as many weeks!). Below are some of the pictures I have been sent by you, our wonderful friends and blog followers!  And since it’s been so long since we did a post, stay tuned for two more updates:  our review round-up and the Another Faust playlist.

The first four pictures of my favorite shots of Another Faust sightings all around town.  The first is at the Harvard bookstore, the others are in Barnes and Nobles and Borders in various cities on the east coast.  The last four shots are of my recent reading in the Hague (note to all Netherlands residents: next reading will be October 3rd at 1pm at ABC Amsterdam). 

Finally, before signing off I should mention that Daniel and I will be going on an east coast tour of schools and bookstores between October 22 and November 20.  Stay tuned for more information, or click here.

It’s finally here!  Today is the big day when Another Faust hits bookstores! Naturally, we’re super excited and can’t wait to hear what you think of our story.  Please post your thoughts here or on Amazon. We love discussing our book with readers, so you can chat with us on twitter (DinaNV and DanielNayeri). As for the big day festivities (which in our family usually means overdosing on sugar, cream, and chocolate from all over the world), well, Daniel must be having some fun, but since I  live abroad, I can’t see the book in stores today.  A little sad, but I’ve been living vicariously through friends who are spotting the book all over the place.  Speaking of which, if you see the book in a store, send me your pictures!  Here’s one from Rachel, which I just had to include because of the fabulous red nails in the shot!  

Sighting of Another Faust in stores!

Before I sign off, I should give you a quick update of our Another Faust plans and activities. Daniel and I will be traveling through the east coast and Texas to promote the book and to do readings and talks in October and November. We’ll be going to bookstores, high schools, and libraries, and some colleges.  Please let us know if you want us to come to your school! We’re very excited about going on the road and talking about all things Faust.

Last week, I was standing in an old stone balcony in Sicily, looking out over the beautiful horizon, when I got a creepy, tingly feeling, like someone looking over your shoulder.  I turned, and the only person there was my husband. I turned back to the view and thought, I’m imagining things.  Then I felt something rubbing up against my cheek, then moving slowly down to my jaw. I slapped at it and pulled away a mosquito, tangled up in my hair. I caught myself thinking, maybe it’s a spy. Then I laughed and turned back to the scene. When the breeze picked up, I turned to leave. When I glanced back, I saw that I had been standing right above this.  I’m still creeped out by the coincidence:

Nicola and Valetin. Clearly, this has nothing to do with Another Faust, but Nicola is the name of Madame Vileroy, the devil incarnate, and the beautiful face of all evil. Valentin is one of our main characters, who sells his soul because of a deep, desperate need to be loved by all. In the book, they have a strange and inappropriate relationship. She’s a mother figure, but uses his misguided attraction to her to corrupt him.

The winner of the signed ARC of Another Faust with a handwritten cut scene is: Kim!  

I don’t know Kim’s last name, but I have her email address, so she’ll be hearing from me soon. Congrats Kim!! Thanks for pre-ordering the book and we’re dying to hear what you think. This is a picture of us whispering tales of  your awesomeness and, as you can see, Daniel is blown away!  You rock! 

As for the rest of you who entered: THANK YOU.  

Another Faust releases on August 25th, and we are very excited to hear what you think. Every pre-order sale counts toward our first week, so your order has been incredibly helpful! 

Also, we are going to do a second round of this contest until the publication date of August 25th.  So go to Amazon or B&N and place your order! All those who entered the first round will be automatically entered.  The rules are the same as before:

The winner will get a free galley copy, signed by both of us, that includes a hand-written excerpt from a cut scene which appeared in the very first draft!  

1. Place your order. Here’s the amazon link.
2. Come to this blog-post and enter the contest by adding a “comment” that you have bought your book. Make sure to include your email address (no cheating, because we will know if you ordered). Once the winner is selected, we’ll ask for an order confirmation, which matches the date you entered the contest.
3. We will select a winner every few weeks depending on number of entries (so tell all your friends). If we have a lot of entries, we’ll do two, or maybe three winners, with each one selected every few weeks.
4. Post your early comments on Amazon! We’d love to hear what you think of the synopsis and the book cover, both on this website and on amazon.
5. Join our facebook page! Just go to facebook and search for “Another Faust” or you can join here.
6. You can follow us on Twitter: Follow Dina here and Daniel here.

Congratulations Kim!!

D&D